ALL THE WORDS

assets/splash/splash_peep.json

@@ -7,13 +7,21 @@
 	"trimmed": false,
 	"spriteSourceSize": {"x":0,"y":0,"w":302,"h":402},
 	"sourceSize": {"w":302,"h":402}
+},
+"splash_peep0001":
+{
+	"frame": {"x":10,"y":422,"w":302,"h":402},
+	"rotated": false,
+	"trimmed": false,
+	"spriteSourceSize": {"x":0,"y":0,"w":302,"h":402},
+	"sourceSize": {"w":302,"h":402}
 }},
 "meta": {
 	"app": "Adobe Animate",
 	"version": "15.2.0.66",
 	"image": "splash_peep.png",
 	"format": "RGBA8888",
-	"size": {"w":512,"h":512},
+	"size": {"w":512,"h":1024},
 	"scale": "1"
 }
 }

index.html

@@ -97,11 +97,14 @@ window.onload = function(){
 			slideSelect.dom.style.display = "block";
 
 			// [FOR DEBUGGING]
-			//publish("slideshow/next");
+			publish("slideshow/next");
-			publish("slideshow/scratch", ["noise"]);
+			//publish("slideshow/scratch", ["conclusion"]);
 
 		});
 
+		// DEBUGGING
+		//Howler.mute(true);
+
 		// LOAD REAL THINGS
 		Loader.loadAssets(
 			Loader.manifest,

js/sims/Iterated.js

@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@ Loader.addToManifest(Loader.manifest,{
 	// SFX
 	coin_insert: "assets/sounds/coin_insert.mp3",
 	coin_get: "assets/sounds/coin_get.mp3",
+	evil_laugh: "assets/sounds/evil_laugh.mp3",
 
 });
 
@@ -202,6 +203,8 @@ function Iterated(config){
 	self.remove = function(){
 		app.destroy();
 		unlisten(self);
+		self.playerA.kill();
+		self.playerB.kill();
 		_remove(self);
 	};
 
@@ -457,6 +460,14 @@ function IteratedPeep(config){
 					if(self.payoff==PD.PAYOFFS.P) self.face.gotoAndStop(7); // Punishment Face
 					if(self.payoff==PD.PAYOFFS.T) self.face.gotoAndStop(10); // Temptation Face!
 
+					// EVIL LAUGH
+					if(self.payoff==PD.PAYOFFS.T){
+						setTimeout(function(){
+							var stereo = (config.opponent) ? 0.9 : -0.9;
+							Loader.sounds.evil_laugh.stereo(stereo).volume(1).play();
+						},100);
+					}
+
 					if(self.payoff==PD.PAYOFFS.T){
 						_isHopping = true;
 					}
@@ -584,6 +595,16 @@ function IteratedPeep(config){
 		self.animationDeferred.resolve();
 	};
 
+	// KILL
+	self.kill = function(){
+		// Remove ALL tweens
+		Tween.removeTweens(self.animated);
+		Tween.removeTweens(self.coin);
+		for(var i=0;i<self.payoffCoins.length;i++){
+			Tween.removeTweens(self.payoffCoins[i]);
+		}
+	};
+
 
 }
 

js/sims/SandboxUI.js

@@ -268,12 +268,26 @@ function SandboxUI(config){
 		}
 		// If positive, add one starting from TOP, skipping anchor.
 		// (UNLESS IT'S ZERO)
+		var everyoneElseWasZero = true;
 		if(diff>0){
 			for(var i=0; i<Tournament.INITIAL_AGENTS.length && diff>0; i++){
 				// do NOT adjust anchor.
 				var conf = Tournament.INITIAL_AGENTS[i];
 				if(conf.strategy==peepID) continue;
 				if(conf.count==0) continue; // DO NOT ADD IF ZERO
+				everyoneWasZero = false;
+				conf.count++; // ADD
+				diff--; // yay
+			}
+		}
+		// ...edge case. fine w/e
+		if(everyoneElseWasZero){
+			for(var i=0; i<Tournament.INITIAL_AGENTS.length && diff>0; i++){
+				// do NOT adjust anchor.
+				var conf = Tournament.INITIAL_AGENTS[i];
+				if(conf.strategy==peepID) continue;
+				// if(conf.count==0) continue; // DO NOT ADD IF ZERO
+				// everyoneWasZero = false;
 				conf.count++; // ADD
 				diff--; // yay
 			}
@@ -302,12 +316,12 @@ function SandboxUI(config){
 	page.appendChild(_makeLabel("sandbox_payoffs", {x:0, y:0, w:433}));
 	
 	// PAYOFFS
-	var payoffsUI = new PayoffsUI({x:64, y:47, slideshow:self});
+	var payoffsUI = new PayoffsUI({x:84, y:41, scale:0.9, slideshow:self});
 	page.appendChild(payoffsUI.dom);
 
 	// Reset
 	var resetPayoffs = new Button({
-		x:320, y:300, text_id:"sandbox_reset_payoffs", size:"short",
+		x:240, y:300, text_id:"sandbox_reset_payoffs",
 		message:"pd/defaultPayoffs"
 	});
 	page.appendChild(resetPayoffs.dom);

js/sims/Splash.js

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ function Splash(config){
 	// PEEPS
 	var peeps = [];
 	self.addPeep = function(x, y){
-		var peep = new SplashPeep({ x:x, y:y, app:app });
+		var peep = new SplashPeep({ x:x, y:y, app:app, blush:config.blush });
 		peeps.push(peep);
 		peepsContainer.addChild(peep.graphics);
 	};
@@ -121,6 +121,7 @@ function SplashPeep(config){
 	// Graphics!
 	var g = _makeMovieClip("splash_peep", {scale:0.3});
 	self.graphics = g;
+	if(config.blush) g.gotoAndStop(1);
 	if(Math.random()<0.5) g.scale.x*=-1; // Flip?
 
 	// Them variables...

js/slides/1_Slides_OneOff.js

@@ -79,6 +79,9 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		_hide(o.btnCheat); _fadeIn(o.btnCheat, 150+1200);
 		_hide(o.btnCooperate); _fadeIn(o.btnCooperate, 150+1200);
 
+	},
+	onend: function(self){
+		self.remove("btmWords");
 	}
 
 },{
@@ -92,19 +95,21 @@ SLIDES.push({
 
 		// Text
 		var t = o.topWords;
-		var b = o.btmWords;
 		if(_.answer=="COOPERATE"){
 			t.setText(Words.get("oneoff_2_cooperated")+"<br>"+Words.get("oneoff_2_top"));
 		}else{
 			t.setText(Words.get("oneoff_2_cheated")+"<br>"+Words.get("oneoff_2_top"));
 		}
-		b.setTextID("oneoff_2_btm");
+		self.add({
+			id:"btmWords", type:"TextBox", text_id:"oneoff_2_btm",
+			x:130, y:392, width:700, height:100, align:"center"
+		});
 
 		// Replace button
 		self.remove("btnCheat");
 		self.remove("btnCooperate");
 		self.add({
-			id:"btnNext", type:"Button", x:304, y:466, size:"long",
+			id:"btnNext", type:"Button", x:304, y:481, size:"long",
 			text_id:"oneoff_button_next", 
 			message:"slideshow/next"
 		});

js/slides/3_Slides_Tournament.js

@@ -84,6 +84,12 @@ SLIDES.push({
 
 		var o = self.objects;
 
+		// Words to the side
+		self.add({
+			id:"text_extra", type:"TextBox",
+			x:510, y:230, width:450, height:500
+		});
+
 		var showTournament = function(num){
 
 			var words = "";
@@ -124,13 +130,17 @@ SLIDES.push({
 			match_header = match_header.replace(/\[B\]/g, "<span class='"+charB+"'>"+scoreB+"</span>");
 			words += match_header+"<br><br><br>";
 
-			// Extra info
-			words += Words.get("tournament_"+(num+1));
-
 			// PUT IN THE WORDS
 			o.text.setText(words);
 			_hide(o.text); _fadeIn(o.text, 100);
 
+			// Extra info
+			o.text_extra.setTextID("tournament_"+(num+1));
+			_hide(o.text_extra); _fadeIn(o.text_extra, 100+250);
+
+			// FADE IN BUTTON
+			_hide(o.button); _fadeIn(o.button, 100+500);
+
 			// FINAL MATCH?
 			if(_matchNumber==9){
 				_switchButton();
@@ -138,10 +148,6 @@ SLIDES.push({
 
 		};
 
-		// MATCH NUMBER!
-		_matchNumber = 0;
-		showTournament(_matchNumber);
-
 		// "Next Match" Button
 		self.add({
 			id:"button", type:"Button",
@@ -158,10 +164,14 @@ SLIDES.push({
 				publish("slideshow/next");
 			};
 		};
-		_hide(o.button); _fadeIn(o.button, 100+500);
+
+		// MATCH NUMBER!
+		_matchNumber = 0;
+		showTournament(_matchNumber);
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
+		self.remove("text_extra");
 		self.remove("button");
 	}
 });

js/slides/5_Slides_Distrust.js

@@ -286,104 +286,14 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		// Worse...
 		self.add({
 			id:"next", type:"Button",
-			x:0, y:410, size:"long",
+			x:0, y:450, size:"long",
 			text_id:"distrust_5_btn",
-			message: "slideshow/next"
+			message: "slideshow/scratch"
 		});
 		_hide(o.next); _fadeIn(o.next, 400);
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){	
-		self.remove("text");
-		self.remove("next");
-	}
-});
-
-// Play with BOTH
-SLIDES.push({
-	onstart: function(self){
-
-		var o = self.objects;
-		_.misc = {};
-
-		// TOURNAMENT
-		Tournament.resetGlobalVariables();
-		Tournament.INITIAL_AGENTS = [
-			{strategy:"all_c", count:23},
-			{strategy:"all_d", count:1},
-			{strategy:"tft", count:1}
-		];
-		PD.PAYOFFS.P = -4;
-		PD.PAYOFFS.S = -1;
-		PD.PAYOFFS.R = 1;
-		PD.PAYOFFS.T = 3;
-		o.tournament.reset();
-
-		// Words
-		self.add({
-			id:"text", type:"TextBox",
-			x:0, y:0, width:450, height:500,
-			text_id:"distrust_6"
-		});
-		_hide(o.text); _fadeIn(o.text, 100);
-		listen(_.misc, "payoffs/onchange", function(value){
-			o.tournament.reset();
-		});
-
-		// SLIDER
-		// HAX - COPY PASTE CODE WHATEVER
-		var x = 0;
-		var y = 95;
-		self.add({
-			id:"roundsLabel", type:"TextBox",
-			x:0, y:y, width:450, size:25, noSelect:true
-		});
-		self.add({
-			id:"roundsSlider", type:"Slider",
-			x:0, y:y+30, width:450,
-			min:1, max:20, step:1,
-			message: "rules/turns"
-		});
-		var _updateLabel = function(value){
-			var words = (value==1) ? Words.get("sandbox_rules_1_single") : Words.get("sandbox_rules_1"); // plural?
-			words = words.replace(/\[N\]/g, value+""); // replace [N] with the number value
-			o.roundsLabel.setText("<b>"+words+"</b>");
-		};
-		listen(_.misc, "rules/turns", function(value){
-			_updateLabel(value);
-			o.tournament.reset();
-		});
-		o.roundsSlider.setValue(10);
-		_updateLabel(10);
-		_hide(o.roundsLabel); _fadeIn(o.roundsLabel, 300);
-		_hide(o.roundsSlider); _fadeIn(o.roundsSlider, 300);
-
-		// PAYOFFS
-		self.add({
-			id:"payoffs", type:"PayoffsUI",
-			x:105, y:170, scale:0.8, slideshow:self
-		});
-		_hide(o.payoffs); _fadeIn(o.payoffs, 300);
-
-		// Words
-		self.add({
-			id:"text2", type:"TextBox",
-			x:0, y:410, width:450, height:500,
-			text_id:"distrust_6_end"
-		});
-		_hide(o.text2); _fadeIn(o.text2, 500);
-
-		// FINALLY.
-		self.add({
-			id:"next", type:"Button",
-			x:0, y:475, size:"long",
-			text_id:"distrust_6_btn",
-			message: "slideshow/scratch"
-		});
-		_hide(o.next); _fadeIn(o.next, 700);
-
-	},
-	onend: function(self){
 		unlisten(_);
 		unlisten(_.misc);
 		self.clear();

js/slides/6_Slides_Noise.js

@@ -153,7 +153,9 @@ SLIDES.push({
 
 // Tournament: simpleton wins
 SLIDES.push({
+	
 	//id:"noise",// [FOR DEBUGGING]
+	
 	onstart: function(self){
 
 		var o = self.objects;
@@ -214,7 +216,8 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		var o = self.objects;
 
 		// Words
-		o.text.setTextID("noise_evo_2");
+		var words = Words.get("noise_evo_2").replace(/\[CHAR\]/g, "<span class='"+_.answer+"'>"+Words.get("label_"+_.answer)+"</span>");
+		o.text.setText(words);
 		_hide(o.text); _fadeIn(o.text, 100);
 
 		/////////////////////////////////////////
@@ -260,13 +263,35 @@ SLIDES.push({
 			if(step=="reproduce"){
 				reproduceSteps++;
 				if(reproduceSteps==6){
-					publish("slideshow/next");
+					
+					// WORDS
+					var words = (_.answer=="pavlov") ? Words.get("noise_evo_2_2_correct") : Words.get("noise_evo_2_2_incorrect");
+					words += " ";
+					words += Words.get("noise_evo_2_2");
+					self.add({
+						id:"text_next", type:"TextBox",
+						x:510, y:160, width:450,
+						text: words
+					});
+					_hide(o.text_next); _fadeIn(o.text_next, 100);
+
+					// BUTTON
+					self.add({
+						id:"btn_next", type:"Button", x:510, y:366, 
+						text_id:"noise_evo_2_2_btn", size:"long",
+						message:"slideshow/next"
+					});
+					_hide(o.btn_next); _fadeIn(o.btn_next, 300);
+
+
 				}
 			}
 		});
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
+		self.remove("text_next");
+		self.remove("btn_next");
 		unlisten(_.misc);
 	}
 });
@@ -340,7 +365,8 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		o.playButton.setText("label_start");
 
 		// Words
-		o.text.setTextID("noise_evo_4");
+		var words = Words.get("noise_evo_4").replace(/\[CHAR\]/g, "<span class='"+_.answer+"'>"+Words.get("label_"+_.answer)+"</span>");
+		o.text.setText(words);
 		_hide(o.text); _fadeIn(o.text, 100);
 
 		/////////////////////////////////////////
@@ -353,13 +379,34 @@ SLIDES.push({
 			if(step=="reproduce"){
 				reproduceSteps++;
 				if(reproduceSteps==8){
-					publish("slideshow/next");
+
+					// WORDS
+					var words = (_.answer=="tf2t") ? Words.get("noise_evo_4_2_correct") : Words.get("noise_evo_4_2_incorrect");
+					words += " ";
+					words += Words.get("noise_evo_4_2");
+					self.add({
+						id:"text_next", type:"TextBox",
+						x:510, y:116, width:450,
+						text: words
+					});
+					_hide(o.text_next); _fadeIn(o.text_next, 100);
+
+					// BUTTON
+					self.add({
+						id:"btn_next", type:"Button", x:510, y:446, 
+						text_id:"noise_evo_4_2_btn", size:"long",
+						message:"slideshow/next"
+					});
+					_hide(o.btn_next); _fadeIn(o.btn_next, 300);
+
 				}
 			}
 		});
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
+		self.remove("text_next");
+		self.remove("btn_next");
 		unlisten(_.misc);
 	}
 });
@@ -368,6 +415,7 @@ SLIDES.push({
 	onstart: function(self){
 
 		var o = self.objects;
+		_.misc = {};
 
 		// Words
 		o.text.setTextID("noise_evo_5");
@@ -378,7 +426,7 @@ SLIDES.push({
 
 		// Slider!
 		var x = 510;
-		var y = 100;
+		var y = 200;
 		self.add({
 			id:"noiseLabel", type:"TextBox",
 			x:x, y:y, width:450, noSelect:true
@@ -389,12 +437,11 @@ SLIDES.push({
 			min:0.00, max:0.50, step:0.01,
 			message: "rules/noise"
 		});
-		_.misc = {};
 		var _updateLabel = function(value){
 			value = Math.round(value*100);
 			var words = Words.get("sandbox_rules_3");
 			words = words.replace(/\[N\]/g, value+""); // replace [N] with the number value
-			o.noiseLabel.setText(words);
+			o.noiseLabel.setText("<i>"+words+"</i>");
 		};
 		listen(_.misc, "rules/noise", function(value){
 			_updateLabel(value);
@@ -402,22 +449,30 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		});
 		o.noiseSlider.setValue(0.05);
 		_updateLabel(0.05);
+		_hide(o.noiseLabel); _fadeIn(o.noiseLabel, 300);
+		_hide(o.noiseSlider); _fadeIn(o.noiseSlider, 300);
 
 		// Continue whenever you want to...
-		var x = 510;
+		listen(_.misc, "tournament/autoplay/start",function(){
-		var y = 300;
+			if(_showContinue) _showContinue();
-		self.add({
-			id:"continueLabel", type:"TextBox",
-			x:x, y:y+5, width:200, height:50,
-			align:"right", color:"#aaa", size:17,
-			text_id:"noise_evo_6_continue"
-		});
-		self.add({
-			id:"continueButton", type:"Button",
-			x:x+215, y:y, size:"short",
-			text_id:"label_continue",
-			message: "slideshow/next"
 		});
+		var _showContinue = function(){
+			_showContinue = null;
+			self.add({
+				id:"continueLabel", type:"TextBox",
+				x:565, y:405, width:400,
+				align:"right", color:"#aaa", size:17,
+				text_id:"noise_evo_5_continue"
+			});
+			self.add({
+				id:"continueButton", type:"Button",
+				x:855, y:440, size:"short",
+				text_id:"label_continue",
+				message: "slideshow/next"
+			});
+			_hide(o.continueLabel); _fadeIn(o.continueLabel, 100);
+			_hide(o.continueButton); _fadeIn(o.continueButton, 100);
+		};
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
@@ -426,6 +481,7 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		self.remove("noiseSlider");
 		self.remove("continueLabel");
 		self.remove("continueButton");
+		self.remove("text");
 	}
 });
 
@@ -435,7 +491,11 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		var o = self.objects;
 
 		// Words
-		o.text.setTextID("noise_evo_6");
+		self.add({
+			id:"text", type:"TextBox",
+			x:510, y:10, width:450, height:500,
+			text_id:"noise_evo_6"
+		});
 		_hide(o.text); _fadeIn(o.text, 100);
 
 		// Next button
@@ -444,6 +504,7 @@ SLIDES.push({
 			text_id:"noise_evo_6_btn", size:"long",
 			message:"slideshow/scratch"
 		});
+		_hide(o.button); _fadeIn(o.button, 500);
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){

js/slides/8_Slides_Conclusion.js

@@ -1,6 +1,63 @@
 SLIDES.push({
 	id: "conclusion",
 	onstart: function(self){
+
+		// WORDS
+		self.add({
+			id:"text1", type:"TextBox",
+			x:3, y:6, width:800,
+			text_id:"conclusion_0"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text2", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:65-10, width:760, size:30, color:"#4089DD",
+			text_id:"conclusion_1_a"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text3", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:115-10, width:760,
+			text_id:"conclusion_1_a2"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text4", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:192-10, width:760, size:30, color:"#efc701",
+			text_id:"conclusion_2_a"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text5", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:242-10, width:760,
+			text_id:"conclusion_2_a2"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text6", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:316-10, width:760, size:30, color:"#DD4040",
+			text_id:"conclusion_3_a"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text7", type:"TextBox",
+			x:176, y:366-10, width:760,
+			text_id:"conclusion_3_a2"
+		});
+		self.add({
+			id:"text8", type:"TextBox",
+			x:94, y:440, width:500, align:"right",
+			text_id:"conclusion_4"
+		});
+
+		// IMAGE
+		self.add({
+			id:"img", type:"ImageBox",
+			src: "assets/conclusion/summary.png",
+			x:10, y:60, width:140, height:350
+		});
+
+		// Button
+		self.add({
+			id:"button", type:"Button", x:615, y:481, 
+			text_id:"conclusion_btn", size:"long",
+			message:"slideshow/scratch"
+		});
+
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
 		self.clear();
@@ -11,24 +68,25 @@ SLIDES.push({
 	onstart: function(self){
 
 		// Splash in background
-		self.add({ id:"splash", type:"Splash" });
+		self.add({ id:"splash", type:"Splash", blush:true });
 
 		// Circular Wordbox
 		self.add({
 			id:"text", type:"TextBox",
-			x:160, y:10, width:640, height:500, align:"center", size:19,
+			x:160, y:10, width:640, height:500, align:"center",
-			text_id:"conclusion"
+			text_id:"outro_1"
 		});
 
 		// Button
 		self.add({
 			id:"button", type:"Button", x:385, y:466, 
-			text_id:"conclusion_button", fontSize:16, upperCase:false,
+			text_id:"outro_1_btn",
-			message:"slideshow/scratch"
+			message:"slideshow/next"
 		});
 
 	},
 	onend: function(self){
+		self.remove("text");
 		self.remove("button");
 	}
 });
@@ -39,16 +97,37 @@ SLIDES.push({
 		var o = self.objects;
 
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ EVOLUTION<br>
 <span style="font-size:0.75em">OF TRUST</span>
 </p>
 <p id="subtitle">
-playing time: 30 min &#8226; by nicky case, july 2017
+playing time: 20 min &#8226; by nicky case, july 2017
 </p>
 
 <p id="loading">
@@ -22,32 +22,30 @@ PLAY &rarr;
 <!-- - - - - - INTRO! - - - - - - - - -->
 <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
 
-<!-- TODO: Focus ONLY on social trust, not governments -->
 <!-- TODO: Also, strong early humor. -->
-<!-- TODO: "You guys, it's time for some game theory". -->
+<!-- TODO: mention "game theory" early again... -->
-<!-- TODO: "live and let live". -->
-<!-- TODO: it's sometimes RATIONAL to distrust: loop of trust & trustworthiness. -->
 
 <p id="intro">
 During World War I, peace broke out.
 <br><br>
 
 It was Christmas 1914 on the Western Front.<br>
-Despite strict orders <i>not</i> to chill out with the enemy, British<br>
+Despite strict orders <i>not</i> to chillax with the enemy, British<br>
 and German soldiers left their trenches, crossed No Man's Land,<br>
-and gathered together to bury their dead, to exchange gifts, to sing.
+and gathered to bury their dead, exchange gifts, and play games.
 <br><br>
 
 Meanwhile: it's 2017, the West has been at peace for decades, and<br>
-we're less trusting than ever. Fewer and fewer people say they trust their<br>
+by golly, we <i>suck</i> at trust. Over the years,
-governments, their media, or even <i>each other</i>. So here's our puzzle:
+fewer and fewer people say they trust their
+institutions, or even <i>each other</i>. So here's our puzzle:
 <br><br>
 
-<b>Why &amp; when do friends become enemies?<br>
+<b>Why, even in peacetime, do friends become enemies?<br>
-or: Why &amp; when do enemies become friends?</b>
+And why, even in wartime, do enemies become friends?</b>
 <br><br>
 
-I think game theory can help explain our epidemic of distrust –<br>
+I think <b>game theory</b> can help explain our epidemic of distrust –<br>
 and how we can fix it! So, to understand all this...
 </p>
 <p id="intro_button">
@@ -120,7 +118,7 @@ Wow, that's mean... and also the correct answer!
 </p>
 
 <p id="oneoff_2_cooperated">
-Sure, seems like the right thing to do... <i>OR IS IT??</i>
+Sure, seems like the right thing to do... <b>OR IS IT??</b>
 </p>
 
 <p id="oneoff_2_top">
@@ -130,30 +128,30 @@ But if you cheat &amp; they cooperate, you gain three coins at their cost of one
 </p>
 
 <p id="oneoff_2_btm">
-And <i>that's</i> the dilemma of trust.
+And <i>that's</i> our dilemma.
-You'd both be better off trusting each other, but trust leaves you vulnerable.
+Trust is nice, but it can let others take advantage of you -- or shoot you as you come unarmed out of a trench.
-But what happens if we can...
+Sometimes, distrust <i>is</i> rational!
+But now, what happens if we play this game...
 </p>
 
 <p id="oneoff_button_next">
-...play more than once? &rarr;
+...more than once? &rarr;
 </p>
 
 <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
 <!-- - - - - - ITERATED - - - - - - - -->
 <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
 
-<!-- TO DO: WEAVE IN MORE ABOUT TRENCHES. "CHOOSE WISELY" -->
-
 <p id="iterated_intro_top">
-<b>Now, let's play for real.</b><br>
+<b>Now, let's play for real.</b>
-You'll be playing against 5 different opponents, each with their own "personality".
+You'll be playing against 5 different opponents, each with their own game "strategy".
 With each opponent, you'll play anywhere between 3 to 7 rounds.
+(You won't know in advance when the last round is)
 Can you trust them? Or rather... can they trust <i>you?</i>
 </p>
 
 <p id="iterated_intro_btm">
-Choose your first, <b>real</b> move:
+Pick your first, <i>real</i> move. <b>Choose wisely.</b>
 </p>
 
 <p id="iterated_info_1">
@@ -240,8 +238,8 @@ Each character will now play against every other character:
 that's 10 paired matches, and 10 rounds per match.
 <br><br>
 Who do you think will get the highest <i>total</i> score?
-Think carefully about it, and then<br>
+<b>Think carefully about it... and then
-<b>PLACE YOUR BETS:</b>
+PLACE YOUR BETS:</b>
 </p>
 
 <p id="tournament_intro">
@@ -268,34 +266,41 @@ next match &rarr;
 </p>
 
 <p id="tournament_1">
-&nbsp;
+Oh, by the way...
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_2">
-Oh, by the way...
+...You may be skeptical about that Christmas Truce story about the World War I trenches.
+Surely that was just a fluke?
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_3">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+Yes, the truce was dramatic, but it was <i>neither unique, nor unusual</i>.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_4">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+Not <i>every</i> trench joined in the peace, but it was pretty widespread.
+Many front-lines came up with the idea independently, and again: <i>despite</i> strict orders.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_5">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+And in fact, even <i>before</i> Christmas, several front-lines already <i>had</i>
+established an unofficial, secret peace.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_6">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+They called it: <b>the "live and let live" system.</b>
+Basically, you don't shoot me, I don't shoot you. And this worked, in a lot of places!
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_7">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+You may still be skeptical. Most soldiers don't spontaneously form peace with the enemy.
+What's so special about <i>trench</i> warfare? 
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_8">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+Well, here's what's unique about the trenches:
+unlike almost every other form of war,
+you have to face the same <i>specific soliders</i> every day.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_9">
-[trench live &amp; let live stuff]
+<b>It's a repeated game.</b> And that makes <i>all</i> the difference.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_10">
-Anyway -- and the winner is...
+Anyway. And the winner is...
 </p>
 
 <p id="the_winner_is">
@@ -309,7 +314,7 @@ Anyway -- and the winner is...
 Congrats, you placed your bet on the right horse.
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_winner_2_nay">
-(Sorry, [CHAR].)
+(Apologies to your bet, [CHAR].)
 </p>
 <p id="tournament_winner_3">
 <span class="tft">Copycat</span> goes by many names.
@@ -399,7 +404,7 @@ and their numbers increased by 5.
 </p>
 <p id="evo_3_tft">
 Alas, <span class="tft">Copycat</span> did not win – but at least they didn't do as bad
-as <span class="all_c">Always Cooperate</span>, who got eaten up by <span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span>,
+as <span class="all_c">Always Cooperate</span>. They got eaten up by <span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span>,
 whose numbers have now increased by 5.
 </p>
 <p id="evo_3">
@@ -424,7 +429,6 @@ who <i>are</i> nice, but not naive.
 </p>
 
 <!-- TODO: Freeman-Dyson???? -->
-<!-- TODO: (other strategies will be introduced later) -->
 
 <p id="evo_7">
 By simply copying the other player's moves,
@@ -478,9 +482,6 @@ start the evolution process!
 stop the evolution process
 </p>
 
-<!-- More reference to game theory earlier? -->
-<!-- TODO: More "me" and "I"??? -->
-
 <p id="evo_10_followup">
 (Note: occasionally, a few <span class="grudge">Grudgers</span> may stick around,
 because when all players except <span class="grudge">Grudger</span> &amp; <span class="tft">Copycat</span> 
@@ -497,7 +498,7 @@ However...
 </p>
 
 <p id="evo_11">
-Look around. There are jerks in the world.
+Look around. The world's full of total jerkwads.
 <br><br>
 If <span class="tft">Copycat</span> is the strategy in this repeated game of trust that's so powerful --
 that even soldiers in World War I trenches independently "evolved" a similar strategy, called "live and let live" -- 
@@ -544,7 +545,7 @@ once you're done playing around, click:
 </p>
 
 <p id="distrust_3">
-As you saw, when people play below some number of rounds,
+As you saw, if you don't play enough rounds, (here: 5 or less)
 <span class="all_d">ALWAYS CHEAT</span> dominates.
 <br><br>
 In 1985, when Americans were asked how many close friends they had,
@@ -581,31 +582,21 @@ once you're done, click:
 </p>
 
 <p id="distrust_5">
-The same thing happens: <span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span> dominates.
+The same thing happens:
-So even if the reward for getting a "win-win" is still <i>more</i>
+with a lower "win-win" reward, <span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span> takes over.
-than the punishment for a "lose-lose"...
+Game theory has two powerful ideas about this:
-<b>if the reward for mutual trust is <i>too</i> low, distrust evolves.</b>
 <br><br>
-I think, as a culture, we're losing the value of finding "win-wins".
+<b>"Zero-sum game".</b> This is the sadly common belief that a gain for "us"
-We're more interested in "win-lose", because viciousness gets views, conflict gets clicks.
+<i>must</i> come at a loss to "them", and vice versa.
-It's live and let <i>die.</i>
+<br><br>
-Maybe I'm just overthinking things, maybe I'm just old and shaking my fist at a cloud...
+<b>"Non-zero-sum game".</b> This when people realize that by working together,
-but don't you feel it? That we've forgotten something?...
+you can create a win-win! (or at least, avoid a lose-lose)
+Without the non-zero-sum game, <i>trust cannot evolve.</i>
+<br><br>
+Speaking of which,
+let's now look at our third &amp; final barrier to the evolution of trust...
 </p>
 <p id="distrust_5_btn">
-...whatevs i dunno &rarr;
-</p>
-
-<p id="distrust_6">
-Aaaaanyway, now you can change <i>both</i> rules!
-(click <b>start</b> to see how, with weird payoffs, the sim
-"swings" between <span class="all_d">Cheats</span> &amp; <span class="all_c">Cooperates</span>...)
-</p>
-<p id="distrust_6_end">
-Once you're done experimenting with this,
-let's look at our final barrier to trust...
-</p>
-<p id="distrust_6_btn">
 <s>Misteaks</s> Mistakes. &rarr;
 </p>
 
@@ -615,7 +606,7 @@ let's look at our final barrier to trust...
 
 <p id="noise_1">
 As cool as <span class="tft">Copycat</span> is, it has a huge, fatal weakness I haven't mentioned yet.
-To understand it, let's say two <span class="tft">Copycats</span> are playing against each other:
+To understand the problem, let's say two <span class="tft">Copycats</span> are playing against each other:
 </p>
 <p id="noise_1_end">
 Being "nice" players, both their first moves will be:
@@ -638,7 +629,7 @@ But if the other person doesn't <i>think</i> it was an accident...
 </p>
 
 <p id="noise_4">
-<b>OH NO AGAIN</b>
+<b>OH NO TIMES TWO</b>
 <br>
 The other player, being a <span class="tft">Copycat</span>, <i>had</i> to retaliate...
 </p>
@@ -659,7 +650,7 @@ Tragic. But now, are there <i>other</i> types of players who can...
 </p>
 
 <p id="noise_characters">
-Let's meet some new faces!
+Let's meet some new faces! (or, new hats, anyway)
 </p>
 
 <p id="character_tf2t">
@@ -689,38 +680,104 @@ Alright, let's see how well these peeps do when they...
 ...play in a tournament &rarr;
 </p>
 
-<!-- fixed 5% chance: winner simpleton, then copykitten -->
-<!-- Need to simulate first to write words, i dunno -->
 <p id="noise_evo_1">
-Noise Evolution, place your bets.
+Let's start with a dozen
-At <b>5% noise</b>
+<span class="all_c">Always Cooperates</span>,
+versus our old winner, the fair <span class="tft">Copycat</span>,
+and our three new characters:
+the forgiving <span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span>,
+the dull <span class="pavlov">Simpleton</span>, and
+the silly <span class="random">Random</span>.
+<br><br>
+Let's say, in each round of a match, players have a 5% chance of making a mistake.
+Who do you think will come out on top?
+<b>Think carefully, then PLACE YOUR BETS:</b>
 </p>
+
 <p id="noise_evo_2">
-Try it, controls to the left
+Alright, you bet [CHAR] wins. Let's find out!
+Use the controls to your left to <b>start</b> the sim in quick mode,
+or go through it <b>step-by-step</b>.
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_2_2_correct">
+You were correct -- 
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_2_2_incorrect">
+Your bet was close, but no cigar -- 
 </p>
 <p id="noise_evo_2_2">
-Simpleton wins, but let's try...
+<span class="pavlov">Simpleton</span> wins!
+This is because <span class="pavlov">Simpleton</span> is actually capable of
+exploiting <span class="all_c">Always Cooperate</span>. They both start cooperating,
+but if <span class="pavlov">Simpleton</span> makes a mistake and cheats,
+since <span class="all_c">Always Cooperate</span> never retaliates,
+<i>it'll keep cheating them</i>.
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_2_2_btn">
+Now let's try...
 </p>
+
 <p id="noise_evo_3">
-...different scenario, place your bets again.
+...the same thing as before, except instead of half-<span class="all_c">Always Cooperate</span>,
+it's half-<span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span>. It's a much <i>less</i> forgiving,
+<i>more</i> hostile environment.
+<br><br>
+Who do you think will win now? <b>Think, then PLACE YOUR BETS:</b>
 </p>
+
 <p id="noise_evo_4">
-Try it, controls to the left, again
+You bet on [CHAR]. Again, go through the simulation...
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_4_2_correct">
+You were right on the money -- 
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_4_2_incorrect">
+Good guess, but someone else took the prize -- 
 </p>
 <p id="noise_evo_4_2">
-Ooh, surprising... but is that true if there's a LOT of noise? 
+<span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span> wins this time!
+That's surprising that with an even <i>meaner</i> starting population,
+<span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span>,
+a <i>more forgiving</i> version of <span class="tft">Copycat</span>,
+was the most successful! (note: <span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span> is so forgiving
+it doesn't even <i>entirely</i> wipe out <span class="tft">Copycat</span>. it shares room)
+<br><br>
+In this case, a bit of "miscommunication" (5% chance of mistake each round) could lead
+to more <i>forgiveness</i>. But is this true for <i>all</i> levels...
+</p>
+<p id="noise_evo_4_2_btn">
+...of miscommunication?
 </p>
+
 <p id="noise_evo_5">
-GIVE A SLIDER FOR NOISE.
+<b>Use the slider below to change the amount of "miscommunication", then hit START.</b>
+At 5%, <span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span> wins.
+What happens at 0%? Or 20%? Or 50%? (it only goes up to 50%,
+because at that point, <i>every</i> move is a coin flip) 
 </p>
-<p id="noise_evo_6">
+<p id="noise_evo_5_continue">
-Explain nonlinear barrier, and real life. Also sandbox.
+When you're done playing around, click:
 </p>
-<p id="noise_evo_6_continue">
+
-Explain nonlinear barrier, and real life. Also sandbox.
+<p id="noise_evo_6">
+The results turn out something like this:<br>
+<b>At 0%,</b> the fair <span class="tft">Copycat</span> wins!
+<b>At 1% to 10%,</b> the forgiving <span class="tf2t">Copykitten</span> wins!
+<b>At 10% to 49%:</b> the unfair, unforgiving <span class="all_d">Always Cheat</span> wins.
+<b>At 50%,</b> <i>nobody wins ever.</i>
+<br><br>
+This is why "miscommunication" is such an interesting barrier to trust:
+a <i>little</i> bit of it leads to forgiveness,
+but <i>too much</i> and it leads to widespread distrust!
+I think our modern media technology,
+as much as it's helped us <i>increase</i> communication...
+has increased our <i>miscommunication</i> much more.
+<br><br>
+At last, let's experiment with <i>all</i> the numbers, the knobs and sliders.
+Let's play...
 </p>
 <p id="noise_evo_6_btn">
-Teaser for sandbox
+...in the Sandbox Mode!
 </p>
 
 
@@ -767,7 +824,7 @@ During each round, there's a [N]% chance a player makes a mistake:
 ...and once you're done playing around, let's recap:
 </p>
 <p id="sandbox_end_btn">
-what we learnt today &rarr;
+what we learnt today! &rarr;
 </p>
 
 
@@ -776,46 +833,73 @@ what we learnt today &rarr;
 <!-- - - - - CONCLUSION! - - - - - - -->
 <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
 
-<p id="conclusion_1">
+<p id="conclusion_0">
-
+Game theory has shown us the three things we need for the evolution of trust:
-TRUST:
+</p>
-- repeated interaction: 
+<p id="conclusion_1_a">
-- win-win: 
+1. REPEAT INTERACTIONS
-- dealing with mistakes: forgive, and try to be clear and honest yourself
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_1_a2">
+Trust keeps a relationship going,
+but you need the knowledge of possible future repeat interactions <i>before</i> trust can evolve.
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_2_a">
+2. POSSIBLE WIN-WINS
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_2_a2">
+You must be playing a non-zero-sum game,
+a game where it's at least possible that <i>both</i> players can be better off -- a win-win.
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_3_a">
+3. LOW MISCOMMUNICATION
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_3_a2">
+The level of miscommunication can't be <i>too</i> high.
+And when there's a little bit of miscommunication, it pays to be <i>more</i> forgiving.
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_4">
+Of course, real-world trust is affected by a lot more than this.
+there's reputation, moral values, contracts, cultural markers, etc, etc.
+And let's not forget...
+</p>
+<p id="conclusion_btn">
+...the <i>biggest</i> lesson. &rarr;
+</p>
 
-DISTRUST:
+<p id="outro_1">
-- loss of social capital
+If there's one big takeaway<br>
-- win-lose, use versus them, zero-sum
+from <i>all</i> of game theory, it's this:
-- gleefully punishing even small mistakes
+<br><br>
+<b>What the game is, defines what the players do.</b><br>
+Our problem today isn't just that people are losing trust,<br>
+it's that our <i>environment</i> acts against the evolution of trust.
+<br><br>
+That may seem cynical or naive -- that we're "merely" products of our environment --
+but as game theory reminds us, we <i>are</i> each others' environment.
+<b>In the short run, the game defines the players. But in the long run,
+it's us players who define the game.</b>
+<br><br>
+So, do what <i>you</i> can to create the conditions necessary to evolve trust.
+Build relationships. Find win-wins. Communicate clearly.
+Maybe then, we can stop firing at each other, get out of our own trenches,
+cross No Man's Land to come together...
+</p>
 
-But above all, there's also...
+<p id="outro_1_btn">
+and all learn...
 </p>
-<p id="conclusion_btn">
+
-...the bigger lesson &rarr;
+<p id="outro_2">
-</p>
-
-<p id="conclusion_2">
-Don't hate the player, hate the game.
-<br> 
-Game theory lesson.
-<br> 
-Short term: game changes players. But don't be cynical
-<br> 
-Long term: players change game, from the bottom up -- evolution.
-<br> 
-So if we wanna cure our epidemic of distrust,
-and rebuild a trusting &amp; trustworthy civic society, it's up to all of <i>us.</i>
-Let's all learn and act to find win-wins, 
-to create repeated interactions,
-(and...)
-</p>
-
-<p id="conclusion_2">
 ...to live and let live.
-<!-- the christmas truce pic/photo(?) circular pic... words overlaid -->
 </p>
 
-<p id="conclusion_button">
+<p id="outro_2_credits">
+"A Christmas Truce between Opposing Trenches"
+Illustrated by AC Michael.
+Published in <i>The Illustrated London News</i>, January 9, 1915.
+</p>
+
+<p id="outro_2_btn">
 &lt;3
 </p>
 
@@ -823,6 +907,25 @@ to create repeated interactions,
 <!-- - - - - - CREDITS! - - - - - - -->
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+<p id="credits_beta">
+<b>END OF BETA!</b> Please let me know what you think!
+Because I'm launching this in a few days, I'm looking first and foremost
+for low-level feedback:
+Specific parts which are unclear, confusing, or boring.
+Bad or problematic phrasing of words.
+Typos and grammatical errors.
+Opportunities to add more jokes.
+And so on.
+<br><br>
+But if you have "high-level" feedback, I'd love to hear that too! 
+I won't be able to put them in this time, but for my next project(s),
+I want to know how I can design stuff like this better.
+<br><br>
+Thank you so much!
+<br><br>
+&lt;3,<br>
+~ Nicky Case
+</p>
 
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